Heads Up!!!

Here is my recount we have been learning to put in speech marks and also learning about personification. I think that I have to still learn how and where to put speech marks.

Heads Up here we ngawi . Going to Heads Up with Oscar and my friends. On Friday we were on our way to Heads Up adventure park in Whangarei. Joey said were here I turned around there was a VERY VERY steep hill Gulp!we had to go up gently or als we would slip off. Then my Nan told us to reverse but joey said no so we went in front of her. The place had a cafe some beam bags and tables, there was a view of the ocean and ground if you were to jump of close to the ocean.Finally we made it to the top we first had to go and get helmets on and then the man will tell us the instructions so we do not hurt or injure ourselves you are not aloud to sit down on the scooter if you do you will fall off and scratch yourself with a big mark. We hopped into the van brmm the car started we went up and up Kreak the door open I was shaking the man grabbed our scooters I was last to get my scooter. Everybody was lines up like it was a race when I got closer I thought I was going to die because it was very very steep. My heart was like a hammer pounding inside my chest. One by one we going going down I was next my heart started pounding faster and faster the man said if you do not want to go down come and i will take you somewhere als but on the same track I faced my fears I left mahina behind and went down I caught up to twinkles my cousin.There was mud flicking up it felt like kaka on our jackets and pants we stopped we heard someone screaming it was mahina telling us to wait up so we did Mahina said stop so we stopped we were waiting and waiting come on mahina let's go .¨We're here¨ said Twinkles.I Said their ¨look at that deep dark forest¨. I went first I stopped there was a ramp we got of our scooters and went up then I jumped back on and went down the ramp we were close to the finish line but we had to go down a steep steep hill my papa said use two brakes so I did. When I got to the bottom my papa said let the brakes go so I did . That was the best day ever.