Have a main reason/idea with supporting detail
Have a summary that restates my opinion and main reason
Try use alliteration, assonance and rhetorical questioning
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Name:Ocian
I believe that kids should play netball.
I no kids should play netball because skills,fitness, and healthiness
The first reason why is because Netball could build skills and make friends .maybe you might verse your cousins and met up again. You could make friends if you do not have enough people in your team and you could just be good at it and then they might say you are really good and then you will start to make friends . You could properly get a compliment from your new friend if you get a goal like if i said nice goal Kuini that could be a compliment.
for example I no netball will make you fit and healthy how could you become healthy easy your muscles will become fitter and healthy You could get confidence versing other schools you could get confidence bye catching the ball because you get scared when you catch the ball .
Main reason 4 How could you become fit easy by running jumping for the ball and defending other schools to get that ball back and when you defend you jump for the ball so you could get that ball back and if you let the ball go then it will be rolling.
Main reason 5 It could develop sportsmanship and you and your team will get to meet each others and who you are so you will get to know each other and you might make friends when they get to know you do you want to be only or lonely.
Summary.For example netball is a fun sport because of fitness and confidence skills friendship and for example versing other schools.
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