My holiday.

I am learning to use different sentence beginning and to make sure all sentences begin with a capital letter and end with a full stop. (then, then, then, then, then)

 I am learning to add detail to the most interesting parts of my recount.

Catching a hammerhead shark and it was my dads birthday.
 On my dads birthday mum and I went to kaitaia hunting and fishing shop. Then we brought him a pocket knife and hunting clothes. We finished getting his birthday present. Now it is time we head back to Unahi wharf. Suddenly i saw my dad. Did he have something? He pulled, he lifted,it was bending pulling it looked like it was about to break out he had it a hammerhead shark! WOW!!! I screamed but in my head saying wow i have never seen one. It was humongous. I got to hold it at the end of him of when he caught it i was holding it under the stomach it was grey his eyes were weird looking staring closely at me.Come on he would not stop steering but. My dad was happy of when that day happen. But he really liked his gift Thank You for reading.